tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7751297901265390690.post7595071687848325959..comments2023-08-11T03:30:31.593-04:00Comments on Laura Unfolded: Quest to Prevent a Funeral for Unspoken WordsLauraUnfoldedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16359095129959686761noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7751297901265390690.post-83566974785093995062011-10-27T23:37:45.529-04:002011-10-27T23:37:45.529-04:00Nice one! I like where you took this... It's a...Nice one! I like where you took this... It's also nice to see the line taken to a more positive place, since I was feeling pretty dark when I wrote it ;) Here's one I loved: Blood rushing to the raised vein decorating both of our foreheads, we talked. The use of the word 'decorating' here is brilliant! I might borrow it sometime.BeaComposedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16487025219514231780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7751297901265390690.post-12257814834104195652011-10-27T22:59:53.321-04:002011-10-27T22:59:53.321-04:00The balancing function in a relationship is my top...The balancing function in a relationship is my topic of choice for writing tonight. Keep it comin', baby!kelmeckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11479994788805637961noreply@blogger.com